the end of advanced 2 !!

i still cannt believe that our beatific advanced 2 time has almost finished. i swear that i am feeling very very sad now because just after one week, we will go separate and it's so hard to have a time to sit together and talk like what we did in last 9 weeks. fortunately, we still have this blog to communicate with each other. now, my friends in level 7 are making a plan to have a party but it is very hard to make everybody coming because each of us has different kinds of things to solve. i gonna treature more about the last week even though we gonna have exams everyday. however, i think that exams for us are not problems at this time because we learnt so many different kinds of things in the last 9 weeks so that let's do it just for fun. hah~~~~~~

without question, every thing we did in the last 9 weeks has its own values because we can see our progress so clear. at the begining, when lili and adrianne showed us that papers done by pevious students, nobody in our class believed that we could do the same job. However, we did and i think that our papers are well done so that we have to say thank you to our two dear teachers Lili and Adrianne because they gave us huge amouts of helps in the last 9 weeks.

for this blog program, it has its specific and particular value. for instance, classmates can see each others' progress at the different time; we can communicate with each other in a different way; we can have a approach to talk with each other when we are separate. please keep doing this program, i like it.

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Feeling of My Paper

this is my first time to write a paper in English so that i had so many mistakes that need LIli and Adrianne to help and correct. at the beginning, i thought that the paper was just for practise so that we don't need to do it so serious and strict. However, i found that everybody in our class worked so hard that i realized that i need to think about it. now, i know why Lili and Adrianne was so strict to our papers because they want to help us prepare very well for our university lives where many many papers are waiting for us.

i still remember when i give the first part of my paper to Lili and Adrianne that they just gave their feedback next day's morning with huge amount of corrections.Hah~~~ after i gave my second draft of the first part, they just gave me back again and also with many new corrections. at that time, I didnot understand why she desire our papers must perfect because i thought we are still student who are learning English as the second language. since i finished my paper, i realized that i have already learnt most of rules very very well for a university paper project. i just want to say thank you to my two teachers who spent most of their time on helping us.

last week, we have had half of our classmates' presentation done. everybody did a perfect and fabulous job. i think it is very interesting to listen their presentations because each of them has totally different topics and it is like to listen each person's life experiences. i got a lot fun and knowledge from their presentations. i hope i will also give you a intertesting presentation on Monday!!!!!!