Feeling of My Paper

this is my first time to write a paper in English so that i had so many mistakes that need LIli and Adrianne to help and correct. at the beginning, i thought that the paper was just for practise so that we don't need to do it so serious and strict. However, i found that everybody in our class worked so hard that i realized that i need to think about it. now, i know why Lili and Adrianne was so strict to our papers because they want to help us prepare very well for our university lives where many many papers are waiting for us.

i still remember when i give the first part of my paper to Lili and Adrianne that they just gave their feedback next day's morning with huge amount of corrections.Hah~~~ after i gave my second draft of the first part, they just gave me back again and also with many new corrections. at that time, I didnot understand why she desire our papers must perfect because i thought we are still student who are learning English as the second language. since i finished my paper, i realized that i have already learnt most of rules very very well for a university paper project. i just want to say thank you to my two teachers who spent most of their time on helping us.

last week, we have had half of our classmates' presentation done. everybody did a perfect and fabulous job. i think it is very interesting to listen their presentations because each of them has totally different topics and it is like to listen each person's life experiences. i got a lot fun and knowledge from their presentations. i hope i will also give you a intertesting presentation on Monday!!!!!!